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He
lifts his left brow then the corners of his lips. Just a little, as he glances
over the two-tier table of specialty breads. Did you notice? I did.
Her
gaze catches mine and we exchange smiles before she turns away. Will she be
looking for others?
A
thirty-something father is engaged in a serious discussion about action figures
with his young son… until the boy suddenly looks up at me, widens his eyes, and
smiles. At me. A perfect stranger. Or, am I?
Daily
it seems as if we all come in contact with strangers, who like us, are simply
plodding on in life, running errands, darting off to work, or what have you.
Then, there are the times when there is an unexplainable connection to a person
we meet by chance. A little sparkle in his or her eye. A slight nod, as if to
say, yes, you’ll be okay, continue on. Think what you may of the situation or
even of me, but my belief is that these chance meetings are not merely random,
after all. Angels? Messengers of encouragement from The Most Holy Encourager?
I
can only hope and believe.
Here’s
the thing: we all need support,
someone to lean on, and love. It sure is nice when it comes from a family
member or friend, but sometimes that person isn’t around or available. Sometimes,
you feel as if you’re facing the world yourself and it sure is a big world out
there!
I
can only hope and believe that God, in His love for each of us, sends a
Presence to cheer us along.
This
is where the premise of my newest novel started to take shape: what if a family
needs help? Ramp up the tension: what happens if their love for each other is
so buried and trapped under years of hurt and mistreatment that they are
blinded to the everyday life around them that causes more anguish? Stack the odds
against them: what happens to a family within 5 days when the hurt gets so bad
that an outsider decides to take things into his own hands and its not for the
better… but then the totally unexpected crisis happens that threatens everyone?
Is
Her
Good Girl sad or hopeful? Will it make you feel emotions that haven’t
been stirred for a while? Will you cry? I hope so! Yes, it’s based upon several
cases of Munchausen Syndrome by Proxy I’ve researched. MSP is not a pretty
relationship between parent and child and often results in death. Then there is
the cave exploration element that I wrote into the story after reading
extensively about spelunking and watching hours and hours of caving videos… and
firing off the imagination of an adventure that meets danger. But, what I’m
really hoping is that you will have to dry your teary eyes from love and hope
when least expected for a family that gave up on
it
long ago.
I
can only hope that we each encounter a directly sent Encourager each and every
time we need to cling to His Hope and Grace.
Cover Blurb for Her Good Girl:
Sometimes
digging deep frees you to bloom.
Sadie
Tremont’s will to survive is killing her. Almost 18, she’s battled mysterious
illnesses, which her mom treats. While her dad devotes his time to underground
caving and her grandmother waits for a miracle, Sadie is running out of time.
Sky,
Sadie’s new boyfriend, offers a sliver of joy. But when he schemes that the
only way for Sadie to be happy is to escape with him from her native West
Virginia hills by killing her mom, she’s trapped. She can’t partner with Sky to
hurt the mom who has hurt her for years … or can she?
When
tragedy strikes and threatens the ground the Tremonts stand on, will they pull
together or give in to the weakened earth beneath their feet?
Opening pages of Her Good Girl:
Saturday
One
Sadie
Finally. After hours under her
watch, I’m sitting solo on the front porch. It’s a little bit after three in
the morning and all’s quiet. The birds aren’t yet doing their chirpy choir thing,
though they will shortly fill the muggy June air with song. But my heart is
pounding. Goosebumps pock my arms. Sweat sluices down my back. My belly is rock
‘n’ rolling to an obnoxious beat. I rub at the floppy waves, but the sensation
becomes wicked. Am I about to puke? This scares me more and I spring to my
feet. Too fast. Black dots explode before my eyes. I cling to the railing in
hope this passes faster than one of Tara-Lynn’s moods. I’m so sick of the
unknown.
Sick. Sick. Sick. That’s the
worst word in my vocabulary.
But, that’s what I am. Sick. So,
she says.
Chill, I order myself and slump
back onto the step. Focus on feeling better, graduating high school, and
getting out of these wacked West Virginia hills as fast as possible.
It’s now that counts, right? Live
in the moment, and all that nonsense. No one is shoving medications down my
throat. No one is making me eat certain foods that spike my heart rate or send
me running into the bathroom every ten minutes. Tara-Lynn—no way am I calling
her Mom—asleep in her cellar recliner, will find me soon enough, whether it’s
sitting here on the front porch or elsewhere. She always does.
Breathe in. Hold. Breathe out,
slowly. Breathe in. Hold. Breathe out, slowly. Feel each muscle relax. Let
peace in.
That’s the garbage the school
nurse instructed me to do a few years ago when I suffered my first breathing
attack—her choice of words. I Googled my symptoms to discover I most likely
experienced a panic attack. Whatever. Sometimes the breathing exercise works. Often,
not.
My tangled body stays tense. I’m
not only disobedient to Tara-Lynn, but also to myself.
Bad girl. The reprimand ricochets in my
mind. Another one follows. And bad girls need fixing.
I grope for the cross around my
neck. Silly me. I’d quit wearing that old thing months ago. Belief in a big God
in heaven watching out for us down here may work for others, but not me. At
least not anymore, not when my SOS prayers come back flopping in my face like
they’d been stamped with a big fat REJECTED across them. A wallop of a
curse stabs my tongue, but I swallow it back when I think of Grandma. She’s the
one person I don’t want to disappoint.
The front door opens. Daddy—plain
old Adam to everyone else—steps outside. In one hand, he holds a knapsack that
I know is crammed with caving gear like emergency first-aid stuff, food,
batteries, and dry clothes. In his other hand, he grips a new set of ropes
he’ll use to descend and then ascend in the caves. Though I’ve watched him
leave for these explorations one too many times, my insides turn cold. Maybe
colder than those underground passages that Daddy crawls through in sheer joy.
I shove my hands under my legs to stop the shaking. My gaze strays to the near woods that crowd the
east side of the property then to my bare bony knees peeking out from my jean
shorts.
“Hey, Kit
Kat. What are you up to this time of morning?”
He may have
used his pet name for me yet I can’t read his attitude since his tone is not
gruff, but it’s sure not happy either. I look into his eyes. “Waiting for you.”
And that’s the truth.
He purses
his lips.
Nervous, I
further open the gate to my thoughts and let words rush out, right or wrong.
“You know, sometimes I’m unsure whether I wait for you to stay or leave.”
Daddy
plops the ropes and knapsack onto the porch floor. The equipment clanks and
rattles inside as if alive and itching to begin a new exploration. My heart
leaps an extra beat, but I tamp down my hopes. He won’t stay. He never does.
His leaving stirs up a lot of trouble between him and Tara-Lynn. So much stress
that it seems like after each of his caving trips she hovers over me more,
eyeballing every move I make. One cough or sneeze propels her into nursing me
back to health even if I feel fine.
Bio:
Elaine Stock is the author of Always With You, which released in
January 2016 and has won the 2017 Christian Small Publishers Association Book
of the Year Award in fiction. She has also penned the novella And You Came Along, originally part of
the Winter’s Kiss novella collection,
plus several short-stories. Her novels fuse romance, family drama and faith in
a clean fiction style. She is a member of American Christian Fiction Writers,
Romance Writers of America, and Women’s Fiction Writers Association, and
contributes to the international “Happy Sis Magazine” and “InD’tale Magazine.”
In addition to Twitter, Facebook, and Goodreads, she hangs out on her active
blog, Everyone’s Story, dedicated to uplifting and encouraging all readers
through the power of story and hope.
Born in Brooklyn, NY, Elaine has now been living in upstate,
rural New York with her husband for more years than her stint as a NYC gal. She
enjoys long walks down country roads, visiting New England towns, and of
course, a good book.
Social Media Links:
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13 comments:
Laura, heartfelt thanks for hosting me on your lovely blog. May you and each of your viewers be blessed with His joy.
I appreciate and enjoyed reading the story behind Her Good Girl by Elaine Stock. I've read this intense, family fuse drama with tears, some laughs. Most importantly it's a heartfelt story that brings a message of God's love, grace and hope for each one.
I do not need to be entered in the giveaway since I've read Her Good Girl. Blessings
And I'm so glad and thankful that you have read Her Good Girl, Marilyn, and that it's touched your heart.
Wow this sounds like a great book Thanks so much for sharing it with us
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Linda, thanks so much for visiting and for sharing on Twitter. I hope you enjoy Sadie's story... I'd love to hear from you if you should read it. May it bless and encourage your heart.
Elaine thank you for sharing with us. Sadie's story sounds very emotional.
Natalya (I like the spelling of your name!!), I try my best to grab a reader's heart and to make them feel what the characters experience. I hope you'll have a chance to read Her Good Girl and to cheer along Sadie.
Interesting post. I'd heard of Munchausen Syndrome, but couldn't remember what it was--or maybe I never knew. I'm reading the book now, so don't enter me in the giveaway.
Kay, thanks for your visit, support, and especially your friendship. Happy reading!
congratulations to Linda
Linda, I can't wait for you to read Her Good Girl and will be in touch with you shortly.
Laura, thanks so much for having me on your wonderful blog!!
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